The Gekko

My first question. What is this supposed to be? At first I'm like 'Okay, country' and then rap and then, what? I have no idea. Please, elaborate a bit. Make ...

Hi there Vandria! Gekko here to review you! :twisted: Okay so I get the poem, you're an outsider or outcast, you have a few friends, you hate the popular kids ...

What and interesting poem you have here, and your eleven o_o Wow, keep it up and you'll be amazing before your twenty. This is a very nice peice of work, ...

This is pretty rough, but I do see potential. But, for some reason it doesn't feel like I'm reading a prolouge, it seems more like a first chapter or something. ...

And this again. This is just another version of your preface/prolouge. Like I said before, you are supposed to change it up. Usually the preface/proulge is her feelings on what ...

It seems like you rushed through this, you need to describe this way more, I mean its not even a page in word. Aphrodite is still a snob, James is ...

Hi there! The Gekko is here again. This still sounds like the Hous of Night, I mean, exactly. She has a step-parent and a parent that doesn't care, fix this, ...

I agree, it does sound like House of Night with faeiries o_o One tip here, this is a prolouge/preface, no? You give as little detail as possible in one of ...